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truly ass ngl. disappointing tbh. didnt realize it was a sequel and thought it was a standalone story about two coworkers, then found out the mc has a bf and was so scared that it would be a cheating story. realized it was a sequel of something but GODDDDD it was so stressful to read.
the ending glazed the mc too much. like hello???? only one and two apology after your stupid ass made your own boyfriend insecure bc you prioritized another man and suddenly everything is good everything is perfect???? the way the first half of the story felt like a setup for a coworker romance too. like hello??? why is the story so focused on niko when its supposed to be yoshino and rou's sequel man???? like just make a whole new series with niko as the mc then tf???? its even worse bc by the end, niko didnt even have a happy ending. like, sure, sui likes him but there wasnt a progress on that nor with whatever niko's ex did. so like, whats the point?
and the way he said "if i wasnt already dating, i would date you" hello???? are you fucking crazy???? saying that while your own boyfriend is currently anxious and jealous and alone????????? fucking crazy man. he could've said anything to reassure hibiya that someone will love him, but saying he'll fucking date him if he wasnt already dating???????? oh gtfo actually. and its so fucking stupid how clueless he is. like he needs everything to be fucking spelled out???? "my bf wont punch you" YEAH bc your bf is fucking kind and considerate unlike your dumb fucking ass!!!! who tf stays in a coworker's place??? someone he barely knows too wtf????? like if you really worry about him then get him to the hospital, or ask another coworker thats more familiar with him for help idk, but to fucking impose and excessively help like that??????? they arent even best friend or anytjing what the fuck??????? i would get if its a one time thing, but staying over for days to nurse him back to health while neglecting your boyfriend whose time spent together was already limited hello????????? and the fact it needs to be spelled out like "what if your bf is the one staying in another guy's place?" for him to realize???? like hello???? pea for a brain????? this stupid ass dude truly needs to use his brain oh my god. and then the ending is just them saying words and shit. not a single action to take accountability. seeing how fucking stupid rou is, i bet it'll happen again in the future. fucking dumbass get your fucking priority straight.
niko already said that rou is rude, but it seems like he didnt learn anything by the end lmfao. fucking learn from your mistakes cant you rou??
god. i cant remember how i felt the first series, but i believe i would've loved that bc i enjoyed most of this author's story. but this one? this one fucking sucks. ruined everything tbh. prolly ruined any development from the first series too even tho i dont remember what the first series was like. but i bet it wasnt as dogshit from the assbutt as this one.