
I really, really like the artwork, but the dialogue and plot are convoluted… I think that everything is going so fast and I get the overall plot that the author is going for, but I feel like there is just so much missing. Not to mention the characters in the story seem kind of flat…again, I get what the author was trying to do but it did not come across like that. I can already see plotholes, but I’m still interested in reading for now … so I’ll see where it goes (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

So it wasn't just me thinking that! The pacing is a bit off too in some places... I like the art too. I feel like this would be amazing as an adaptation of something rather than being the original work. I hope the characters get more fleshed out eventually because right now it's reading a bit like the twilight series lmfao
The storytelling is so confusing what is going on … I can’t keep up. I feel like I barely just got introduced to everyone so I don’t feel attached to any characters
No because I'm also so lost. It's all happening so quick, and it doesn't flow right