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I've decided to drop this and looking through the comments I was right to do so.
If you read this I belive you undoubtedly wanted for once a cool, badass, and competent FL for once. I know Eloise LOOKS like she is the one but she isn't. From day 1 she is shoved around by the male characters, she's basically the same level as your classic miss ditzy and innocent. Don't be fooled by her looks and her 'cool' persona because she occasionally kills people. I can tell from here she'll be infuriating to read.
I bet OG Eloise was way more awesome. Who cares if she died? In this novel she's the one who truly lived by her own autonomy, not this cliche modern transmigrator.