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okay I know this is smut and isn't meant to be taken seriously but I really wanted to enjoy this because the concept and the art is so cute! yet I can't help but get turned off because of how stupid some stuff are, like how her boobs are HUGE but also perky? she looks like a cheap barbie doll when naked and how she doesn't have pubic hair and assumes that everyone else doesn't have it, how he asked her if she waxed, them being virgins and his fantasy of marrying the first girl he sleeps with?
I'm sorry but is this written by a teenage boy or smth?