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This story is refreshing and very good. I was looking for something different, since everything I've been reading lately seems generic and cliché. I actually like it, but I wanted something different and something that would add something to my life, I don't know. At first, I even thought it would be that cliché story of a guy who starts to like and have feelings for a masculine girl, a Mulan-type story, I don't know. But I was impressed by the author, who brought up gender issues we see in our daily lives and gave depth to the characters, making them more real and making us empathize with them. It's really cool to follow this phase of self-discovery that the characters go through over time, which is something I'm also going through right now. The author also shows how impactful their upbringing is, showing that Akira has this self-esteem, autonomy, and self-knowledge thanks to their upbringing. It also shows how difficult, but important, it is to break bad family cycles. I also like that the author didn't reveal Akira's gender and left it open.
Is very sweet, but this story has certain plot holes. I felt the author changed her mind while writing the story, which caused these holes. When the protagonist is rescued and taken to ML's house, I thought ML already knew the protagonist and this would be developed throughout the work. What reinforces this idea for me is the fact that in the initial chapters, we see MC call a clinic that is saved as a friend (which could perhaps be ML's clinic, and the secretary who answered MC ). I thought MC had a child with ML. We predicted that resulted in ML's son, that's why the children look so similar. That Yul was actually the son of his previous relationship with ML, but since his husband, who passed away, couldn't have children, decided to accept MC and be the father of this boy. And that's why the rich family mistreated MC (but treated Yul well, because they needed an heir). And the MC actually didn't transmigrate, but rather was using this mechanism to deal with depression, so much so that the author doesn't completely discard the idea, but uses it in another way.