DateSyrup05 September 3, 2025 12:28 pm

The writing in this story just feels so disingenuous --More so than the typical toxic BL story. It feels like there's no soul in it and they're just ticking off boxes for what would "sell", even if this includes glossing over abuse and trauma. As a yaoi/BL veteran, it's starting to get really stale for me to read.


I just want the market to shift towards fluffy stories again, is that too much to ask for?

    brokeboy September 3, 2025 1:10 pm

    I agree. Honestly, the way webtoons come out—They’re writing for a check not from the soul. I know we all need money but please write something you care about. You can write from the soul/or from subject interest and get a check! It’s possible! You can write for fun and get a check!

    When you write solely for a check you tick the boxes but the writing will almost always fall flat. Almost but not always—some folks are legit creative. I don’t shame them entirely, the editor is also to shame.

    Editors should be a creative writing majors and help bring stories to life. However, I highly doubt most editors even took courses in the creative writing. They just read what’s popular and copy and paste onto whomever they’re editing.

    brokeboy September 3, 2025 1:11 pm

    Also if you want fluffy don’t go for yaoi. Go for shonen ai. You’ll find fluff there.

DateSyrup05 August 12, 2025 12:48 pm

HEART, MY SHAYLA, FORGET ABOUT THE DOCTOR AND LEMME SPOIL YOU

DateSyrup05 August 5, 2025 12:42 pm

the idea of Osiris watching them flirt and bathe together through that mirror creeps me the fuck out can we not do that please ( ̄ε(# ̄)Σ

    Isekaied by truck-kun August 5, 2025 3:07 pm

    But the one watching through that mirror is either Hathor or Sekhmet tho? Idk if I forgot something.

    DateSyrup05 August 6, 2025 11:58 am

    even though sekhmet has the mirror, I think the mirror was created by Osiris and it was seen spying on sekhmet in an earlier chapter. anyhow, anyone spying on their alone time gives me the ick, it's so gross

DateSyrup05 June 28, 2025 7:10 am

Fuckass side story

DateSyrup05 June 19, 2025 2:10 pm

"must've been the wind" ahh climax

DateSyrup05 June 12, 2025 12:20 am

MR LIM, WHEN I CATCH YOU MR LIM

DateSyrup05 June 8, 2025 2:13 am

I think the author is trying to say something about how humans often experience attachment regardless of incompatibility. daejong is attached because he doesn't want to relive losing a loved one again. Now suhyeon is also attached for whatever reason and is even going to the lengths of acting like a lover once more to keep daejong besides him. it's also interesting to note that suhyeon has stopped eating without daejong which could indicate he isn't feeling safe without him; maybe that's a trauma response?

anywho, I'm still not rooting for this relationship at all and suhyeon can go swallow rocks for all I care

DateSyrup05 May 25, 2025 12:23 pm

Courtney's whole attitude towards her family is so relatable lol destructive families, can't live with em, can't live without them

DateSyrup05 May 10, 2025 1:12 pm

Waitress, give me more cuteass himbo and teacher please? waitress!! Hey waitress!!!

DateSyrup05 May 9, 2025 11:58 am

Ngl that grapist spirit totally jumpscared me. This author has a talent for drawing unsettling and sometimes down right scary panels; I love that

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