beta
The writing in this story just feels so disingenuous --More so than the typical toxic BL story. It feels like there's no soul in it and they're just ticking off boxes for what would "sell", even if this includes glossing over abuse and trauma. As a yaoi/BL veteran, it's starting to get really stale for me to read.
I just want the market to shift towards fluffy stories again, is that too much to ask for?