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the dirty talk is getting more & more cringe as the chapters goes by and i feel so disappointed with the jeong guy. you can clearly see that this is written by a man cos no woman will want to graped herself just because her life is boring. i like the artsytyle but this is terrible BDSM smut i ever read.
Nah fr the rape scene was outta pocket and disgusting . It’s weird that people lowk f with that I know this is BDSM but that scene was whole lotta something else
I agree! the author is so trying hard to make BDSM to the point it was out of place esp that scene — that was something else and also making the FL having thoughts of how much she like to get grape is insane! it’s unacceptable for me that a woman wants to get grape, maybe to be “touched” but using “that” kind of word is off.
I just read the raw, after this scene they make love & they try to fix their problem
Link?
Just search newtoki
Can u pls just link it idk how to insert pride and persistence in the search bar …please please
pm me here so i could sent the link
tbr I had no idea u could even private msg ppl on here LITERALLY so I just tried ?? It said “send mail” and I posted / sent something hopefully it worked
I already sent the link! Enjoyyyy!!
kindly pm me here
Idk how to pm can you post link?
AHHH TYSM
sorry i cant post it here, it can be easily reported… so just click my profile and find the “sent mail” & I’ll send it there.