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people always talk about the character development but i feel theres been little to none... either this is an extremely long slow burn or just a bit lacking in that department, i really hope its coming soon and he better be like taeju or better because this backstory made me question his actions even more.. Why would this trauma make him act so coldly and disrespectful to others and Dan? Like dude you have been in poverty before and yet you still used Dan's poverty to your advantage? He was so lucky he was taken in so kindly and not used like Dan
(Also im not at all one of those anti Jinx haters dont attack me haha i just wish the characters had a little more depth, especially with character development, even Dan is still the small person he was before