beta
Ummm cute story but so many unresolved plot lines?! Like the mage who ate the brooch, Karyan’s route, Ilya’s dark side, magic tournament, and siren +whatever the other roommates name was, and so much more
The ending was so rushed… I wanted a bit more angst… also wanted to see a Karyan romance plot ngl
Why did the storyline focus so much on avoiding the brother inc**t plot line? Like literally so irrelevant, unimportant and lowkey weird