
I uh.. like how the story is progressing but uh.. don't wanna judge the artstyle too but still.. um.. doesn't that makeup look heavy in a way?.. no? Is it only me?

The eyeliner(?) and lipstick is too much, even though the latter is pink. The problem is that the MC is originally an adult who studied cosmetics for adults and it doesnât seem like she had any practice with children. This also applies to the artist, of course, because I know the story will have characters praising her âbeauty.â If anything, the MC should have a lip tint or something, but maybe that doesnât exist in this world yet.

It's not just you. It's.....odd for a former mua and sales rep to be that intense about using a lot of cosmetics on a 13year old. I realized more than the art style, something else was just so distractingly off about reading this. Then I realized it was the backgrounds. they are usually just a gradient of colour. And not just for her thoughts or inner monologues. It was so painfully obvious in chapter 7 with all the disappearing furniture.
I just obviously want her to be independent and not have any romance with anyone but then again there needs to be romance at the end to have a "happily ever after" effect. Damn it's just nice if she becomes president and live better life for herself after talking care of that ghost-like sicko momo wannabe just looking at her gives me a bit of goosebumps.. and I lowkey don't want to forgive anyone who never helped the og Sera.. like even if she had bad luck, someone or anyone could've tried to help her and ik they have their situation but it's really stupid in a way no one noticed the changes around her. Like be fr y'all