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Ignoring the non-con for a second the art is shit the plot is shit I’d rather someone jerk me off while that person is in a Roblox cosplay, that would be more interesting than this. I feel like this got written by a straight person, because if it was queer written I guarantee it would be better. Literally if you want gay short smut? Just go on ao3, wattpad or tumblr I guarantee you a queer teen would write better. Also which mf decided these massive 8 foot pole dicks were hot genuinely. Like sorry I don’t want to see a pipe shoved up some guys ass. Speaking of which WTF is up with the background characters… why are they so ugly. Also all of the reactions in this?? DRAMATIC or just plain inaccurate. I’m fine with big dicks (normal big dicks not 13 inches.) but that’s just an organ re-arranger he would’ve been screaming from straight PAIN not pleasure. There’s only so much I can ignore but when it’s all shitty it makes me scream