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He bought me for 50 sacks of rice. Soongap is nearly beaten to death by his master when friendly gia...
I realy liked it. Maybe there is too much sex scenes and I'd have loved a lot more of their intimate moments to be OUT of sex scenes. Because in some way it makes it seem as if they only "love" eachother because they have good sex together. I know it's not only that, it's about the things they learn about live and themselves when they are together, but it was not that well depicted in the story. I also HATED how ofthe the narriation is just Soongap voice-off telling whats happening... lie you are a manwha!? SHOW ME whats happenign, why are you waisting ink just putting into text someting you can show in your drawing?
I may sound harsh about this but it's because i really loved this story and this details really pissed me off. Appart from that, I LOVED the drawsing stile, the design of the characters and the plot. Maybe I'd have loved for the story to try to use the plotn to get a little deeper into certain topics, but that is just my expectation. I don't think that story did anything wrong on that regard. Really liked it