
idk if it’s just the first chapters that have bad writing or why people like this so much but i can’t get past ch14 it’s sooooo boring it feels like ur witnessing someone’s roleplay on twitter idk. literally just this:
(them in a suggestive scenario)
vampire guy: “ur so cute”
bottom: “s-stop”
vampire: *bites him*
and then they bang
and it keeps going for the longest time omfg i got tired of it sorry im sure it has potential but it didn’t immediately hook me so bye
i knew it was gonna be a short story but i didn’t think it’d be THAT short wtf i feel like this could’ve been stretched out at least a little bit more. there are so many things left for interpretation which i guess is done on purpose but it feels very..dull?? it’s like..you’ll never have the actual answer you want to know. does it make sense? i dont know im kinda in shock