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idk if it’s just the first chapters that have bad writing or why people like this so much but i can’t get past ch14 it’s sooooo boring it feels like ur witnessing someone’s roleplay on twitter idk. literally just this:
(them in a suggestive scenario)
vampire guy: “ur so cute”
bottom: “s-stop”
vampire: *bites him*
and then they bang
and it keeps going for the longest time omfg i got tired of it sorry im sure it has potential but it didn’t immediately hook me so bye