beta
cute but some parts of the story just don’t flow with each other. like the whole demon fox thing, how it was the glasses as to why Jae’s face was blindingly glowy, and the other random girl who saw Jaes face as if it was censored. These things didn’t flow with the story and felt more like it was just thrown into the story for no reason. And the whole goddess thing too with Jae being kidnapped. mid story and mid writing