beta
I had some kind of hope it would develope better but it's too wattpad and too sketchy for me. The MC is annoying, extremely pettit he's even tinnier and shorter than Sophie, the only girl we get to compare him to (in terms of mesurement). He's the one who's unrespectfull, like he was saved from falling and crashing his face against the ground. He dares to call the newbie giant clown and giraffee. He's the one being inappropriate. The poor guy just wanted indications, scared Liam by mere accident, saves him and gets insulted.
The faces are extremely femenine, all the boys look like girls with dicks. It's kind of uncomfortable for me. Not my cup of tea.
Judging by the narrative it's not gonna get better, the dialogues are very poor as the sequences. I don't recommend it unless you read it with your mind turned off or wanting to laugh at it at some point. It's better not to read it if you are too counscious or critical with how well developed is the plot and sequences.