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Reading this story is like stepping on Legos both hurt and are colorful meaning (f4ggots) I get yall eat this story up simply bc its mlm doing it 24/7 but thinking that the MLove interest is going to have any type of character development is like wishing for ur dad to come back from that milk trip! Yall praise anything bare minimum that man does Dan needs to pack his bags and gtfo before he's gets written as a Stockholm syndrome character like any other bl author who likes writing these insanely horrid writing undeveloped unoriginal stories. If ur going to write angst do it right and let's not romanticize abuse YIPPE! (* >ω<)
If u dont like what i said pls reply and say why >0< bc if ur disagreeing I would rly consider seeking therapy or better stories w better ansgt which I would love to share! Hope that helps!!