
This reminds me of dead mans switch (another zombie bl), when the mcs encounter a group of survivors and everything seems too good to be true, an there’s a sense that something isn’t right, and eventually, it isn’t. (this isn’t main plot just sub plot) If you haven’t read it, it’s completed, and I’d definitely recommend it

This is why I shouldn’t judge a book by its cover. The ml is fineeee, but he has problematic views. He doesn’t understand why she would ‘throw her life away’ and thinks she’s only trying to protect her pride. She’s afraid of being assaulted, which he knows because he saw how the men around him behaved when the emperor was deciding where she would go. He saw her smiling, even though she was marrying an old man, and concluded she was just being greedy. Then he assumed her life would be better if she would simply let things be. Five chapters in, and this isn’t for me. I like character development, but it’s clear the author is trying to portray the ML as a good guy just because he didn’t assault her. I can’t stand when authors highlight bad men to make the ML look better

I don’t understand about the author trying to portray the ml as the good guy ? Idk if it’s cause I lack media literacy but i haven’t seen that so far at all also this is a story that as far as I can tell will have grey characters so it makes sense for the ml to think that way although it’s annoying .. ( ̄∇ ̄")

He is being shown as a good guy because he acts decently regardless of having the opportunity to use and abuse a woman he's attracted to that was given as a slave. We already saw how socially acceptable it was to denegrate a woman in her position, so he was the best option. He is apathic to the reasoning of the MC because he literally has not being given a reason to care: she was never a priority for him before, and now she's just a maid he took in and is curious to see what she'll do with her life, but he continues to live his life and his goals are not related to her. The problem you have is the setting the story takes place in. The setting is cruel, there are novels with much more mild and amicable settings for the MC and their lead.

Everyone is saying they hate this side couple, but I feel like they’re better written, imo. The first couple is so one-dimensional, with the mc fitting the typical bottom archetype lacking personality, burdened with debt and medical bills

That’s great! That's why I mentioned it's strangely forgiven by some. Just looking at the main page of this site, the overwhelming majority of what’s trending is yaoi with SA. Not saying you read them, but even in stories where it makes no sense to add SA, it is unfortunately present, and readers excuse the main ML's actions just because they're attractive. Personally, I find the inclusion of SA in this story unnecessary, but that doesn't improve the writing of the main couple in comparison.

I agree I find it unnecessary aswell which is why for me regardless of writing I don't like the side couple the fact one of them is a sexual assaulter makes me unable to like or care for their happiness as I don't really want to see someone who does that happy icl but I get others will have different opinions on it but yh even if the writing is the best ever the simple fact he sa someone is enough for me to hate it though I do love the main couple so I don't really agree with the writing being better but that's just a difference in opinions which is absolutely fine
I think I’m one of the few who actually likes that Victor didn’t instantly fall for Heart. I wanted him to have time to mourn Henry so he could learn to love Heart as his own person. With Henry, it seems felt like Victor loved the idea of him more than Henry himself. I really wanted to see that growth and a relationship built outside of Henry. But honestly if Heart ends up being unfaithful, I might drop it I wanted to see them build loyalty but honestly it’s not that deep lol