beta
Melia, a girl who cannot use magic, has spent her life suffering mistreatment in the home where she ...
6/10
this one has a good direction! honestly i think that the worldbuilding and setting was lacking, there wasnt enough buildup to tell the reader whats going on and why its important so you just feel a little puzzled. its also rushed and it feels like chapters were skipped or something bc of how the story jumps so suddenly. the art however is really nice!