beta
wow it's fresh out the oven! this one has a good direction! honestly i think that the worldbuilding and setting was lacking, there wasnt enough buildup to tell the reader whats going on and why its important so i just feel a little puzzled. its also rushed and it feels like chapters were skipped or something bc of how the story jumps so suddenly. the art however is really nice!! ^^ and i do like the concept but i wish i was given more information and buildup to really immerse myself in it! (read up to ch.3)