beta
Review:
4/10
*Spoiler alert*
Alpha is a poorly developed character with inconsistent and contradictory behavior. He lies, threatens and even kidnaps Omega, but when Omega escapes, Alpha suddenly repents and starts acting like a good partner. This abrupt and superficial change sounds forced and has no basis in real character evolution. It's frustrating to see how Alpha could have treated Omega with respect from the start, instead of using manipulation and violence.