beta
First, great story, really can feel the obsession of love from both side, that being said a couple icky thing, he was cheating on his gf with uke, that a no no, shouldn’t have attempt to do anything at all or at least break up with your gf first before doing that shit. Then for some reason I can feel the weird tension between him and the blond hair guy, sure the making sure he was okay and shit were fine but comforting him on the same small ass bed ?? Yeah nah, that a bit too close for comfort, would he get mad if he found uke do that with someone else ?? The way the author make the chemistry between them so misleading that I thought it will contribute to the plot somehow but nope, legit those thing was not important to plot at all beside the misunderstanding of the seme claim to be the bf of blondy to protect him. It feel so unfinished regarding that.