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Of course I do like the development I'm seeing in Jiho and how his feelings for Yujun are helping him get in touch with his other emotions, but I feel like the moment he fell for Yujun was too sudden? Like before that we didn't really get any indication of romantic feelings from his part (it was more like curiosity) and the fact that this happened like a single chapter after he admitted to being attracted to that girl's older brother. It was also kinda cringy how he was only there to "teach him a lesson" and then there's like no mention of his character after that. I def felt like him and his sister were going to play more major roles, but maybe we'll see in future chapters. I just feel like some Jiho could have some more time to sort his feelings through and get to know Yujun more, like become better friends with him, instead of instantly falling head over heels, nervous blushy mess. Like I know they're trying to show that he's just a realistic teenager but it just does not fit his character. Kind of just feels like author wanted to quickly get them together so we could move on to more major conflicts. Like maybe they felt like them being in love could help them get through those problems more easily, but I think them as friends and slowly falling in love while figuring things out would help their bond become even stronger. Idk, maybe it's just that I dislike fast paced stories.