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I enjoy this but boy do i need a breather sometimes.
The worst part about the most current update is the whole "this is a dream" and another possible person being the namer for the ml. No matter if the girl was introduced like in the story or later on after the mc and ml get together the problem would still be around in regards to who the actual names is for the ml.
Maybe the chapter wasn't clear or its left in suspension but I can't tell if the namer the mc found is the actual namer or if its wrong in spelling or something.
Even if the girl is the actual namer then the ml just spent months trying to get with the mc for nothing. I get there is a chance he won't go be with her but let's be honest if that were the case the mc would avoid the ml just cause he knows the actual partner of the ml. At that point telling the mc he's a namer will just be all the more gutt wrenching and heartbreaking.
Author stay playing the mind games like they a jedi.
Also I hate how the intuition isn't smack dead clear or in your face like in transylvania with the vampire zing.
Also what's stopping somebody from having the same situation with no dead give aways that 1 of the possible 2 people aren't their partner? So 2 people could have the same name made ofnthe same characters and be born in the same time frame requirement!?!?!? Do you flip a coin to figure it out or avoid both?
I’m so done with some of these main characters causing problems and never being held accountable. Stop coddling or downplaying their stupidity. If the male lead, a friend, or anyone warns them not to do XYZ because it’s dangerous, and they ignore it, why the hell is the blame shifted to the one who gave the warning?
This happens constantly, especially in mafia or high-stakes books where the MC has no training or understanding of the risks. If someone says “don’t engage” or “don’t trust this person,” and the MC does it anyway, then shocker—the warning was right—they deserve the consequences. And yet readers defend them? No. If I warn you, and you still touch the hot stove, I have every right to be pissed when you burn yourself.
This isn’t just about male leads either. Even when the ML is trash, their warnings are sometimes valid. You don’t need a damn dissertation to know “this is dangerous” means *don’t do it.* But nah, the MC does it, gets hurt, and it’s everyone else’s fault. Stop excusing this nonsense.
I’m tired of readers crying, “Where’s the ML? Why didn’t he save them?” Why does anyone need to save someone who shouldn’t have been in danger in the first place? The MC knowingly causes problems, ignores advice, hides what they’re doing, and when things blow up, it’s *never* their fault? No, that’s on them.
This trope is tired, predictable, and ugly. If you like it, fine, but stop blaming everyone else when the MC is at fault. Accountability exists. Let’s leave this garbage in 2024.
Ps trash ml are still trash even if they give warnings. I'm just tried of yall using the fact they have bad behavior as a reason to ignore prediction and warnings being factual. I love me too much to allow a warning or precaution go in one ear out the other. Yall complain but be part of the problem like the call is coming from inside the house.
hell yeah. it is so frustrating to read a story with a character like that most especially with the "don't be close/trust that person bcs i sense bad aura blabla" and then give it a day, you'll see him talking to that person. ahhwhakskekwkkama next chap: he got abducted. ok. you deserve that ig !
Here's a list of bad character writing or at least sloppy in my opion
1. Gullible or naive characters who don't listen to warnings then fall for traps and cry about the other party as if their the problem- it's like walking up to a child eating beast and putting a child in front of it then being surprised when it gets eaten. What did you expect?
2. characters who are used as family glue especially when they are tasked to mend relationships between hurt, abused, and neglected children just to fall in love with the person who did said actions.
3. No consequences for characters because they have become nice
4. Putting incompetent characters around the mc to make them look better rather then just actually making them better or more skilled.
5. Characters treating others as tools or extras but using them for their own benefit or when helping will look good for them- usually the mc
6. picking up companions for the savior appeal but the companion to only be seen or adressed once in awhile
7. Badly made harems- the people involved only seem to catch feeling for good deed people commonly show and have been taught since pre-k
8.god complex but they never loose or struggle- elceed is a book that shows how to write multiple characters who can have God complexes but because they struggle it helps humble them
9. aults coming from modern times then going to historical whether as an adult or child and diregarding common moral stand points for the plot
10. Those situations where they go to deal with a case or operation and just happening to stumble apon a forced or desperate character who they make into an Allie, what about the others who you just killed who could possibly be in similar positions- just capture and kill after finding out they have nothing to offer
11. Characters going the love contract or pact route before they venture to find others who were in similar situations who have gotten out- for example femal leads who find strong and independent women after they have formed a contract. It makes me think they didn't try to find help outside of a partner and took the fastest option.
Didn't read everything but 3 is most bad shit
didnt read everything too but HELL YESSS
HEAVY ON 1, 4, 5, AND 7!!! when characters do exactly what they’re not supposed to and tragedy befalls them- im not able to feel bad when it’s the one thing they weren’t supposed to do LMAO?? then, i can’t stand it when an mc is extremely reliant on peers/enemies being idiots or knuckleheads to appear smarter! the lack of effort is noticeable, and the near perfect capabilities clashes with their boring personality lmao. plus, nothing is wrong with getting help from other characters but if that’s their only purpose it’s redundant… seeing an mc lack any type of real struggle during their journey or having too many good coincidences comes off lazy since those directly show character development or a characters complex thought process
on top of that, randomly creating a harem based on that mc’s strength alone screams an author projecting their dream of women loving them for doing the bare minimum. it makes the women 1 dimensonal and their only purpose = thirsting over mc gets annoying/tiring
I agree so much on 4 3 and 7. 10/10 yapping my guy you are so right.
Whether its drugs or pheromones hes def been used or in such states where nothing ahould be counted as consensual. I think its safe to say the MLS family plays a huge role with what's wrong with him including that wack ass doctor. Also that comment about never having had his consent considered made me angry beyond words cause HUH!?! Weve gotten enough flashbacks or comments about some of the problems he's dealt with. I wouldn't even be shocked if the reason he slept with the mc is because of a drug that he was spiked with. I want to know more cause his lore bout to be down right horrendous and shiver inducing.