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I said what we all think. I could go on a rant about the plot holes, or lack of genuine build up of things but I wont. The problem is that this is 9 chapters of beginning, middle, and end without the actual circumstances, depth, flow, and build up that make a book. Its like a oneshot or a quick fanfiction was made into visual depiction. In all honesty it felt like a student assignment that was made to just meet the requirements rather then genuine passions or depth.
The art gorgeous but the lack of consistent context and details make it a 7 out of 10. If this was a 15 to 30 chapter it would have hopefully been better. Its not rush or all over the place. Instead just not a fully formed story. I might come back and rant about all the problems but honestly im just hurt it ended on such a lack luster and unfurnished way. I lowkey hope this gets redone with more depth and detail since it has clear potential and usable factors that made it interesting. I rember a few books having done that before. It just fell flat from what could have been executed.