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I’m trying to get through this but it’s really frustrating. Art style, perfect! Storytelling, great! Characters, interesting! Worldbuilding, fascinating! Smut, absolutely phenomenal! But what is completely throwing me off is how annoying the seme is. I understand his character and why he acts this way, but he’s so incredibly selfish and bratty when things aren’t going his way. It’s so incredibly frustrating I can’t even enjoy the smut without getting annoyed. I don’t care if your parents died 11 years ago, can you do your fucking job??? You have a responsibility, take care of it. You’d think he wouldn’t want others to end up like him, right? But he is so reluctant to guide even though it barely takes any effort for him. Seriously, I’m only on ch. 14 so no spoilers but I really couldn’t keep going without talking about this.