it had potential, but the plot ain't plotting. even the smut ain't smutting. did the author run in a marathon while writing this? it's so rushed
I understand but it's a short story so…
I mean, there are many great (or at least readable) short stories out there so that's not enough reason to be this sloppy with your job. idc if there's no plot and just pwp, but even the sex scenes didn't feel great because how rushed it was. but then again, hey, who am I to judge, right?
must be hell cleaning all that piss from the desk (it got on the keyboard too!) also imagine the smell, if they ain't thorough with the cleaning, the smell would stay on that desk (except that's their desk, they would love the smell). at least do it on the floor next time gusy for easier cleaning.
I just know Tenshi is Yoichi Hiruma's descendant. I'm really familiar with that kind of blackmail pattern
not Leon giving Asha a month day-off just so he doesn't have to deal with Kiel's nonstop nagging
MY KID HAS GOTTEN SO HUGE ICB im getting so emotional rn, the way I see him from being that tiny kid to gradually become THAT big first hand ong I need another sequel this can't be the end
then maybe rian should let the woman peg him. win win