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The story seems jumbled, like it can't keep track of a single plot line. Goes from the Sorenbergs, to the Eisenbergs, to the king... It's all mixed up. It felt like they completely forgot about the king for a while there. However, it is a very cute story, and I'm not much of one for childcare stories.
I think its cause it looks like a chapter is missing.
They spent so much time implying he was going to be the demon lord, only for it to rapidly end with some experiment. It's kind of a waste, in my opinion.