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Waste of cute art, like... The characters are awkward and the time skip was so weird, and why tf are they all falling for her, they should have been suspicious of her even as a baby considering that there are monsters that can change their appearance but no, everyone loved her at first sight and somehow ended up liking cute things out of nowhere when they're supposed to be crazy and shit, like I wouldn't expect some group of elite killer guard to just love a baby for it's cuteness when they could kill that same baby if they had to in a war, the story would have been more interesting if they showed weakness and idk the demon king tries to kill them but the baby Mc stops it somehow. I'm just saying, it's going too fast and there are too many flaws in the characters. The fact that she keeps taking shit and doesn't talk back to them when she clearly can now that she's old pisses me off, LIKE START DOING SHIT NOW THAT U CAN, and it would have been nice to get a training mana arc where she gets hurt and then the king start noticing her more and nurse her or something and uh yeah that would explain her power cz ain't no way a 7 year old is just randomly wielding 6star spells like it's tea time. And the fact that they all accepted her as his child is so fucking weird, does he not know if he did it with a woman or not? Can we at least get a "oh he's a playboy" excuse??? Like Why are they just ignoring it and not asking him or idk doing some weird blood test? And that Interpret shit was so weird, wdym u talk to babies, when he's supposed to be a "whisperer" who controls those he talks to (in this case animals) does he also control babies?? They fr added that feature just to give some kind of connection to the interpret guy and the baby.
Okay I'm done. (▰˘◡˘▰)