backwords

listen, i read this only because it was in a recommendation list and there wasn’t a single point where i was hooked. to note, i haven’t bothered to learn anyone’s names so i will refer to them as ‘the wife,’ ‘husband,’ and ‘beast.’

1) to make them two separate entities instead of one is pointless. the husband knows he is the beast, and it is throughly implied in the first chapter that they are one entity that the husband despises. why make them two?

2) the fact that we only ever see the beast bonding with the wife is so annoying. not once do we get to see the husband come out of his shell and stop that self wallowing act, and open up to her fully. all we get is a small bit in the end that implies that he did.

3) the beast and the wife get it on in literally every chapter, i felt so much more could have been done with the plot instead of countless scenes of the same act over and over and over again.

4) the art style threw me off so much. there were times when the wife did look like a woman, and as the story went on, she looked more and more like a child to me. i get that she’s supposed to be young and cute and youthful but LORD give me a break

5) AGAIN i was so tired of seeing the beast that i just skipped through most of the chapters with him. im so upset that we didn’t get to see the husband and the wife bond at all, basically, if you consider how much we saw the beast and the wife.

i never leave comments under fics because to me, there really isn’t a point, but this one pmo so much that i had to say something. may this fic never find me again, even if it was good in some moments, justice for the husband

if this isnt the full chapter then where do i read the full ones guys??? are they translated?!