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Am I dyslexic or this story is a mess? No offense but the phasing of this story is one of the most brutal ones I've laid my eyes on. Completely illegible, why is it suddenly an omegaverse? Oh, now they're childhood friend? Can the seme stop randomly asking about the condition of the uke asshole? I know I'm being nitpicky but I can't be the only one getting a brain aneurysm after reading it. It was such a huge letdown for me! .·°՞(≧□≦)՞°·. I thought it would at least be coherent!