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I’m not a fan of the spiked drink trope, cause it always feels forced and somewhat like an easy way out. I would much rather see some sort of a build up and a prolonged sense of tension between Lorenzo and Rian. I mean I wanted them to want each other SO badly they start to go crazy and then something happens. But oh well, that’s probably too much to ask
Judging from the comments I’m in the minority but I really wish they would’t fuck next chapter: A) Rian is clearly drugged and that just feels super iffy B) it would break the little game the two of them are playing. Rian realized Lorenzo is attracted to him and is now using that to his advantage to get information, so it’s like tug of war between them right now.