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I feel like this story has a really intriguing premise and I like the characterisation so far but I keep getting hung up on the artwork. I appreciate how difficult it is to illustrate a webcomic (I would know- I’ve tried to make one myself) but the art is jarringly disproportionate scene to scene. I feel like it’s most obvious between scenes with a side profile and any other angle for the head that the eye position and size keeps changing dramatically and in some of the shots it’s to the extent of feeling uncanny how incorrectly positioned they are. It’s a shame because in all other ways I like the art work and how the character designs are really strong despite the realistic looks they’re going for.