beta
This shit is so fucked up... First the story is completely insane, the rape was never called out other than ML trying to guilt trip MC into more dubiously consented sex. The commie stuff was boring, it would have had more sense if there was clearance about the red haired guy from the dungeon being a fan of those types of action movies, but it's not so it feels super unnecessary and cringe. Also, considering the fact that they're stepbrothers, this is still incest and the approach is so uncomfortable... Last, but not least the only thing I enjoyed was the artstyle, it's gorgeous, but sometimes the scenes looked wonky or seriously awkward. And the way the age gap changes is also weird, I get it how MC should basically be 36, but was trapped in a dungeon so he's 26 and ML is 35, but the gap was 1 year, then it turned into 9 years... I understand it, but it's confusing.
Thus comes the end of my critique, rest in peace to the author, but damn, that was not worth the sanity I lost while reading it.