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clearly i wasnt here for the plot so... thank god i dont know the characters too well hahahah..
i dont mind the first chapter cause im used to reading worse stuff but after reading the comments it might be a bit tasteless especially coupled with Prompto's baby-ish talk...
THOUGH I HAVE TO SAY kudos for making their shlongs reasonable sizes? like THANK GOD they were more realistic than those weapons I've seen in other works.