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I'm having a hard time reading this NOT due the upcoming manipulative behavior, but for that nasty apartment. BLEACH!! Use it please!! Yes, you're in a financial tight spot and you don't live in an elegant neighborhood, but that's no excuse for your living environment to be so dirty. The amount of mold in that apartment is driving me crazy and grossing me out. I can barely focus on the story every time the main characters are inside that cramped area with all the mold growing around them. All I wanna do is donate a ton of bleach and mold resistant paint to the MC to clean his place adequately and make it actually livable.