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Craig has been thinking a lot about death lately. Working thirteen-hour shifts to pay off his father...
This plot is VERY linear. But like what do u do with a 30 chapter story? I think that its nice there’s no wack ass plot but because of the length of the story i dont really get an emotional attachment to any character because theres not a lot of moments where i see whats unique about each character. Except for the guy who randomly speaks in a pirate language making him the hardest to understand. It needs more chemistry moments for this to be good