I haven’t read a st8 story in soooo long because they are just never good or there’s always some evil duke lol THIS is what I’ve needed deep in my soul and loins ლ(´ڡ`ლ)
The loan shark seme’s part in this story/triangle really made me like this story so much more. It was the only thrilling part of this tale and I did wish his part would have ended better. The “special” ep didn’t end properly IMO I don’t know why it even was added.
The main seme at first I couldn’t tell what he was up to at all I thought he was some stalker with a “use me” kink and it took me awhile to see that he truly was just nice and not really up to anything sick.
The rest of this story was good but very one-note and dragged on with heavy amount of mental health drama with the uke in every chapter. The sex scenes were great all around. I’d prob read this again.
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This is not only bl, although i have more of them in my defense i cant really find that easily straight / gl series that are so edgy
I like that he at least keeps trying to get away no matter how many time he somehow cums from giant butt play. Keep running Ken doll!! It’s really the only way this is hot-able. No insta-love insta-forgiveness so far. I like the chase and the art even if I don’t really know the plot outside of the captivity lol
This is why I red BL because of fuq ass ding-bat written bitches like this as our options for st8 stories. Ooohweeee the way I wasted my damn time!!
I would have really liked some transition scenes for the seme. He was only on both ends of the spectrum at all times. His character development didn’t have time to marinate.
I really wish I liked this. Idk what it is but I find myself losing attention throughout each chapter as I read because I just can’t hook into this story at all. The last one had me consumed and addicted to where I’ve re-read it 6x. I’m not wanting it to be the same tale but I just want to feel the reading-euphoria—but all I feel is blank + nice art—that’s it. Meh
I’m a little let down that the seme is a huge green flag puppy (happy 4 all who really and badly need/want that tho) it’s a cute dynamic but I wanted a little more messy-possibilities that aren’t only the uke having some bad familial traumatic past (snore). But I can’t always wallow in darkness I supposed and I have to come to the light at times like that angler fish. Cool concept either way
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This is a doofy ass way to write sex back into the story. I am always let down by Jinx even though I keep thinking it has to go up from here; that it can’t get any more ass than this— but, behold..
Something like Jinx but better and with an actual plot to follow. I like toxic and horrid tops/seme’s so nothing beautiful and not the known popular ones.
I just REALLY wished she would have hated their first time since it was forced sex and she was pretty much gaslit to do it. She like instantly liked it’ as soon as he started. The scene quickly turned into “my body betrayed me” type shit. I stopped this right after that. It had so much potential.. I just don’t get why it was written that way after such a cool premise was laid down. （￣へ￣）