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I get why Louie would want to spare his brother, he doesn’t want to have that burden of his death on him. But .. his brother isn’t innocent. He incited a war. People are dying because of him and I don’t see how sacrificing your own servant and possibly jeopardising a country is okay, just to save your brother. I’m not upset at his soft/meek character, I don’t expect him to be some overpowered mc, I would’ve been fine if he decided that he needed to save his brother & found a way to do it not at the possible expense of others, or if decided to save him at the expense of others such as now, that it not be framed as some goody goody thing he did, or the “right” decision. How could he not be distressed at the consequences?? What he did was very selfish and that’s fine! As long his character understands the gravity of his decisions and we DEAL with those emotions in the story. I’d be okay with that! But it feels like the author doesn’t think it’s a big deal? Im just not convinced by this character and it feels so blergh