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I feel like alexis' villain arc was waaay too abrupt. He was green flags all the way, then suddenly oops, btw, ml absolutely *hates* prophets, to the extent that he will immediately throw out his beloved husband. We needed way more foreshadowing or maybe a proper flashback to whatever the hell his trauma is with fortune tellers.
Then, just as suddenly, he's now gone into obssessive kidnapper mode. We got a *little* bit of his perspective, but it still felt quite rushed to me. I wanted to see more of a downward spiral rather than this sudden dive into crazy