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So.. my fault for not double checking the tags or whatever(I dunno about you but I didnt see shota in the tags)- Hell, I saw the age gap tag, thought it'd be one where they're both legal when they get together, plus I genuinely thought the uke was at least in college or something(from how he looked in the first chapter)
But no??? Shit's straight up pedophilia, to put it blatantly— the artstyle degraded towards the end, from college looking uke to looking like a middle schooler. Not to mention the inconsistencies when it came to drawing the uke's body, he'd be looking all toned in one chapter then a total twink in another and gosh, I feel like a wasted a good 30 minutes reading that.
In the flashback sequence of the seme, while he was doing the oonga boonga with a random girl, he had a difficult time finishing until he imagines the uke, who was a LITERAL CHILD at the time.
I'm just disappointed is all. Decided to finish it cause I was in too deep and I hate leaving shit unfinished. Like don't get me wrong, I like me a good age gap yaoi, but NAHHH THIS SHIT AINT IT CHIEF