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I hope they choose to explore Dan more as a character. In the first few chapters there was a certain stubbornness to him that’s been lost to his feelings of “gratitude” towards Jaekyung. I do miss the times where we’d see a spark of something that really hated being looked down on — now he just accepts being looked down on by Jaekyung. I can’t wrap my head around him going from the guy who swallowed down a huge thing of alcohol because Jaekyung called him delicate, to this guy who would let Jaekyung poor a soda on his head. I know he feels indebted to him, and maybe having no self worth outside of working for a huge athlete is where his backbone went to hide, but I would like to know more of Dan’s thoughts like… WE don’t know Jaekyung. That means Dan doesn’t. So is Dan’s past trauma causing him to mix gratitude with affection? Maybe something to do with his absent parents? I hope I’m not expecting too much character exploration, because I was honestly pretty disappointed with the resolution in BJ Alex and that was super mild compared to this. I hope the plot is gonna plot SUPER hard to make these characters multidimensional