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1. Chill, kinda
2. Emotionally constipated, both of em
3. May the Seme(Top) know the hottest flames of hell and a bed of dented needles await him
1. First couple is ok, i initially read this story when their story had come to an end and I thought that was it. I was happy with their ending and was content. Rereading it tho, I get that the seme is suppose to have this character trait where he ONLY has of importance the uke, but Christ that gets old fast for me in this story. The uke too, it’s like in spite of him supposedly having other things in life, he really only had the seme to revolve around his life as well.
But whatever, they were still cute aside from that. He was still a decent person in the end and their romance was still endearing. A lot of sex and miscommunication.
Honestly though it was the cute, if you really don’t think bout it too hard. They are incredibly enamored with each other and their relationship progresses better than the other two couples without much hurt. They take a bit to properly communicate and through outside forces they get there eventually.
2. For as much as they shit on the seme and uke in this story, I really didn’t hate em as much. Yeah he’s still a POS for the way he went about it, but again it’s BL. Nothing will ever get me away from the fact he was going at it without thinking bout how the uke felt about it at first, this damn useless drumstick. Stepping away from that and continuing with their romance aspect. JESUS CHRIST was the seme super emotional constipated and inept. However, for as in tune as the uke is with others emotions he is also emotionally constipated so I thought the constant badgering on one side of this party was entirely unwarranted. Yeah, he knew how to read people, didn’t mean he knew how to act on his emotions. I think overall the story does what it needs to do and it’s tell you, almost hand feed you what the author intended with their characters, and i don’t wanna defend this seme entirely for his actions but man it was like everyone dogged on him.
Either way he was still a POS, but not nearly as bad as some of em made him out to seem cuz here comes the real KICKER.
3. FUCKINT FUCKER FUCKING CHRIST FUCKER SICK BITCH I FUCKING -
Where to begin? I’ve read some shit before, I have, but nothing irked me as much as this one. I FUCKING HATED THE SEME. You entirely get the feeling of codependency and loneliness from the uke and the desperation of not being left alone and it breaks your fucking heart and taking advantage of it was the fucking dumpster fire seme.
I genuinely almost closed the tab when he got hit by a car cuz I thought “this THIS is my happy ending.” I was cheering when the uke left. I just wanted him to be happy, I really did. I wish he could’ve picked himself up or something idk. I knew that this wasn’t what was gonna happen tho cus he was in a sense grooming himself beyond belief for the seme even post leaving him. Kinda like an abusive relationship. It wasn’t romantic at all, this one was straight up abusive all the way to the end. When he cried happy tears from having his named called out T-T. I fucking almost threw my phone across the room. shit ass way to end it honestly.