
it’s trying too hard to be edgy. at least jinx and killing stalking are readable

Idk how i can defend it but imma try?
There was more to the plot than JUST r*pe.
The whole storyline for murder mystery to be solver anddddd you were rooting for the cases to be solved mostly. Their relationship was just a element to the story. It was a scary read ngl so you're not wrong at all girl I agree
Here I see no plot whatsoever, revenge is no suspense it's the most basic ass excuse for story to progress.
Chile ENOUGH WITH THE BACKSTORY '