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I like the art but like the people before me said... There's smth I don't like abt the characters. Maybe cuz it feels as if they're taking the matters of war a bit too lightly? They are too trusting of e/o and the ml should show at least bit of contempt towards her for being apart of the enemy kingdom no? N in a war how can u keep tabs on someone whether they kill people or not especially the if it's from the enemy's side. Ur too busy fighting for ur kingdom n caring for ur comrades ain't no way u'd be that friendly towards her from the get go.
I get ut she looks innocent, cute naive n pitiful whatever u may say but don't u have a bit of distrust towards her in case it may be an act??
Idk I'm trying to make sense out of my unknown discomfort but overall I'll still keep on reading and see where this is going. The characters are pretty and I'm a sucker for pretty. Lol