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I'm yapping about Domestic Beast a lot because I've been following it for years... Yeah it would've benefitted from being a bit longer and a bit more thoroughly explained. Idk if the author kinda got into something in the middle of writing this that caused them to end the story in a rush (literally c4-5 was fast as hell). Author is currently doing the 3rd volume of Smoky Nectar and another story, so I'm not sure if they'll revisit Domestic Beast in the near future, but I hope they will. This story had such a promising/interesting premise (2 twisted individuals who were forced to be with each other??? omg) but the execution just went off the cliff half way... Maybe I shouldn't have expected too much given the author's track record (they aren't a strong writer) but still...