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This is so exciting and well done but I regret reading it bc I need to wait for more chapters omggg. I love the mc and the story flows very well. Intros to new plot points are tied in very well. I really like how the story is going so far~ a lighthearted but interesting feeling while reading. pls don't disappoint
Okay ive read up and its still doing really well. The only complaints i have are that there arent enough tomance scenes with alsian. The newest chapter with the "like me" parts were so funny. I reslly need him to get more screentime. Speaking of that, i like how this story is so clear with the love interests. Petro gets no screentime, and i dont even think the crown prince is considered one. Althought he could be, him and petro are only involved with the plot and barely get "chummy scenes" or even any at all. I also have mixed feelings about her biological dads family. Her family tree is so complicated lmao... i like dive and the foster brother also has a unqiue concept. Yeah like all the brothers are different i really like that. Ravi is still my fsvourite bc he acts realistic i guess?? Not saying the others are unrealistic, i just like his personality and concept w the mc. Thats partially why i want this biological father arc to end... i want them to all meet up and i want to see ravi again. It occured to me that she still hasnt told them or him that she found her biological dad?? I cant wait for their reaction. And of course i need more alsian screentime. Anyways its doing really well. The rating is peetty much the same if not higher. And the story is consistent. I havent read it in a long time but it still feels exciting. Now i have to eait for more chapters though...