beta
Bye this is really good. Started reading and now i cant fall asleep... some parts are cringey but its already. I thought he had a brother too idky. But lowkey finding his family was pretty easy i thought itd take longer. And the op abilities are getting a bit ridiculous help. Idk its actually really fun to read but tbh there isnt alot of appeal for the side characters. I guess they all look too npc?? Theyre not memorable at all except a select few. I feel like hes forgetting about alot of the features in his power but i understand cuz idek whats going on atp. Hes getting expansions and new skills like every chapter id forget the past ones too.