beta
NOT 100% ACCURATE!!?...
Soooo like can this come back. I feel like i read something similar to this but this is way better. Firstly its pretty funny. Its wholesome and lighthearted in the beginning. But it lowkey loses that whole feeling later. I guess it makes sense for the plot but it still loses that consistency. Im still enjoying the plot though. Fantasy romance + childcare + action. Again, its not really consistent with the genres i feel like it keeps switching. The execution is done well its just not that good i guess. Also im not really a fan of the romance. Likd idk i dont think they suit eachother. I liked them in the beginning but now they dont really have that dynamic anymore. Im also sad because i liked alot of the side characters but they all kinda disappeared as the story progressed and leaned more toward action. Anyways overall this is pretty good but i feel like its trying to do too many things and its getting messy